--- a/thesis/tex/rfcs.tex	Fri Feb 06 15:35:18 2009 +0100
+++ b/thesis/tex/rfcs.tex	Fri Feb 06 15:59:05 2009 +0100
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 \chapter*{Requests for Comments}
 
-\name{Requests for Comments} are documents that propose or define Internet standards or best practices. They are controlled by the \name{Internet Engeneering Task Force} (short: \NAME{IETF}) and can be found on their website: {\small\url{http://ietf.org}}\,.
+\name{Requests for Comments} are the documents that propose or define Internet standards and best practices. They are controlled by the \name{Internet Engeneering Task Force} (short: \NAME{IETF}) and are available on their website: {\small\url{http://ietf.org}}\,.
 
 A particular \RFC\ is located at {\small\url{http://tools.ietf.org/rfc/rfcNNNN.txt}}\,, where ``\texttt{NNNN}'' is the four-digit number of that \RFC. For example is \RFC\,821 located at {\small\url{http://tools.ietf.org/rfc/rfc0821.txt}}\,.
 
@@ -20,6 +20,5 @@
 \item[\RFC\,4954] \emph{\SMTP\ Service Extension for Authentication}
 \item[\RFC\,5321] \emph{Simple Mail Transfer Protocol}
 \item[\RFC\,5322] \emph{Internet Message Format}
-%\item[\RFC\,0000] \emph{}
 \end{description}