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Various stuff: Checked quotes, s/further more/furthermore/, etc
author markus schnalke <meillo@marmaro.de>
date Wed, 11 Jul 2012 09:24:47 +0200
parents b59201e345e5
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--- a/summary.roff	Wed Jul 11 00:00:34 2012 +0200
+++ b/summary.roff	Wed Jul 11 09:24:47 2012 +0200
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 and options that diverted from the main task of mmh, being an MUA.
 I have modernized the code base removing obsolete functions and
 activating modern features per default.
-Further more, I improved the style by refactoring clumpsy code
+Furthermore, I improved the style by refactoring clumpsy code
 and by defining or forcing clear concepts.
 All my work was motivated by Antoine de Saint Exupery's well-known
 statement:
@@ -99,7 +99,8 @@
 of the result.
 .\" behind closed doors; talks I've given
 My work on mmh was independent of the nmh community.
-This enabled me to follow my vision straight and thus produce
+.\" XXX straight?
+This enabled me to follow my vision straightforwardly and thus produce
 a result of greater pureness.
 .P
 Mmh shall be considered as an inspiration for the future development of nmh.