1.1 --- a/preface.roff	Mon Jul 09 22:32:24 2012 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/preface.roff	Mon Jul 09 23:42:59 2012 +0200
     1.3 @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     1.4  and editing already, it was not too difficult.
     1.5  In contrast, setting up nmh to a convenient state became a tedious task
     1.6  that took several months.
     1.7 -Once having nmh arranged to a convenient state, I enjoyed using it
     1.8 +Once having nmh arranged this way, I enjoyed using it
     1.9  because of its conceptional elegance and its scripting capabilities.
    1.10  Nevertheless, it was still inconvenient for handling attachments,
    1.11  non-ASCII character encodings, and similar features of modern emailing.
    1.12 @@ -131,14 +131,15 @@
    1.13  .[
    1.14  kernighan ritchie c prog lang
    1.15  .]
    1.16 -A book about system-level C programming can be helpful
    1.17 -additional literature, such as those written by Rochkind and Curry.
    1.18 +A book about system-level C programming, such as those written by
    1.19 +Rochkind and Curry,
    1.20  .[
    1.21  rochkind advanced unix prog
    1.22  .]
    1.23  .[
    1.24  curry system prog
    1.25  .]
    1.26 +can be helpful as additional literature.
    1.27  Old books are likely more helpful for understanding,
    1.28  because large parts of the source code are old.
    1.29  The reader is expected to know the format of email messages and
    1.30 @@ -194,12 +195,11 @@
    1.31  Chapter 2 discusses the work done in the project.
    1.32  It is organized along the three major goals of the project, namely
    1.33  streamlining, modernizing, and styling.
    1.34 -Not all the work done in the project is described,
    1.35 -because that would bore the reader.
    1.36 +Not every change is described because that would bore the reader.
    1.37  Instead, important changes and those standing for a set of similar
    1.38  changes are described and discussed.
    1.39  Chapter 3 finishes up by summarizing the achivements and taking
    1.40 -an outlook to the future of the mmh project.
    1.41 +a look into the future of the mmh project.
    1.42  .P
    1.43  .I "Italic font
    1.44  is used to emphasize new terms.