# HG changeset patch
# User meillo@marmaro.de
# Date 1236003306 -3600
# Node ID 40968008fe7c206975ed5c0619e7311528d0e595
# Parent  74cc4428c0746d9bb27f6250234c90e6e4314cf1
some improvements

diff -r 74cc4428c074 -r 40968008fe7c masqmail.tex
--- a/masqmail.tex	Sun Mar 01 22:22:55 2009 +0100
+++ b/masqmail.tex	Mon Mar 02 15:15:06 2009 +0100
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 \newcommand{\oneline}[1]{
 	\frame{
 		\vfill\vfill
-		\centerline{\textbf{#1}}
+		\centerline{#1}
 		\vfill
 	}
 }
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
 
 
 
-\secframe{Email? MTA? ...}
+\secframe{email? MTA? \dots}
 
 
 \frame{\ft{What are MTAs}
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@
 
 the post offices of email
 
-definition: FIXME
+MTAs transfer mail from senders to recipients
 
 }
 
@@ -145,6 +145,11 @@
 
 
 
+
+
+
+
+
 \secframe{about masqmail}
 
 
@@ -231,7 +236,7 @@
 }
 
 
-\oneline{questions about masqmail?}
+\oneline{questions?}
 
 
 
@@ -248,7 +253,7 @@
 
 
 
-\secframe{when I meet masqmail}
+\secframe{when I met masqmail}
 
 
 \frame{\ft{using unmaintained software}
@@ -264,15 +269,17 @@
 }
 
 
-\frame{\ft{diploma thesis}
+\frame{\ft{solving two problems}
 
 Summer 2008:
 
 problem: find a topic for the diploma thesis
 
-The great idea: solve two problems
+the great idea: solve both problems in once
 
-use the diploma thesis to revive masqmail
+- \textbf{use the diploma thesis to revive masqmail}
+
+- \textbf{use masqmail to do a great diploma thesis}
 
 }
 
@@ -331,13 +338,13 @@
 
 \frame{\ft{planned was}
 
-- purpose and structure of an MTA/of masqmail
+1) purpose and structure of an MTA/of masqmail
 
-- security analysis
+2) security analysis
 
-- code improvements
+3) code improvements
 
-- documentation, test, distribution
+4) documentation, test, distribution
 
 With the goal to release a new version and get it into Debian
 
@@ -346,15 +353,15 @@
 
 \frame{\ft{however, it resulted in}
 
-- (introduction)
+1) introduction
 
-- market analysis
+2) market analysis
 
-- mail transfer agents
+3) mail transfer agents
 
-- masqmail's present and future
+4) masqmail's present and future
 
-- improvement plans
+5) improvement plans
 
 Became pretty theoretic (I don't worry)