# HG changeset patch
# User meillo@marmaro.de
# Date 1223386335 -7200
# Node ID b3ba69ef35abada9a9cb64f0a48a5aa04b993ced
# Parent  e150e6406019ef8c1cc03501f4283f6680365c26
added text about audience; added FIXMEs

diff -r e150e6406019 -r b3ba69ef35ab thesis/tex/0-preface.tex
--- a/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Tue Oct 07 14:45:43 2008 +0200
+++ b/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Tue Oct 07 15:32:15 2008 +0200
@@ -3,49 +3,38 @@
 \addcontentsline{toc}{chapter}{Preface}
 
 \section*{Preface}
-Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, \cite{brooks95} consectetur adipisicing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor
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-culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum. Lorem ipsum dolor sit
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-et dolore magna aliqua. Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation
-ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor
-in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse. Cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla
-pariatur.
-
-Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia
-deserunt mollit anim id est laborum. Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur\index{Daten}
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-id est laborum.
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-aliquip ex ea commodo consequat. Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in\index{Texteditor}
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-dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla\index{Geistesblitz}
-pariatur. Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui
-officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum. Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet,
-consectetur adipisicing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et
-dolore magna aliqua.
+Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, \cite{brooks95} consectetur\index{Daten} adipisicing elit
 
 
 \section*{Organisation}
-text
+%FIXME: write about organisation of the book: parts, chapters, sections. And more thats useful to know.
+%TODO: have this section after ``Audience''?
 
-\section*{Audience and Assumptions}
-text
+
+\section*{Audience}
+This document is targeted for \masqmail\ users and for people interested in mail systems in general. Security problems in electronic mail, \unix\ and the \NAME{C} programming language will also be discussed. Additional ones planning to take over an unmaintained software project will find real life experience in here.
+
+In each topic, basic knowledge is %FIXME: vorrausgesetzt
+. Nevertheless introductions are given and sources for further reading will be mentioned.
+
+This work focuses on the \unix\ operating system. Experience in usage, administration and program development is assumed. This includes the basic toolchain (e.g. \name{tar}, \name{grep}, etc.), user, file and permission management, as well as writing, compiling and installing programs written in the \NAME{C} language.
+
+General information about \unix\ can be found in %FIXME: references
+. %FIXME: references
+explain about administrating \unix. And developing programs in \NAME{C} may be learned from %FIXME: references (``The C programming language'', ``The Unix programming environment'', ...)
+.
+
+%TODO: should I tell them to send email to me when having questions? Or somewhere else?
+
 
 \section*{How to read this document}
-text
+%TODO: what to write here??
+%TODO: include this in section ``Organisation''?
+
 
 \section*{Conventions used in the book}
-
+%TODO: check if this tells what is really used!
+%FIXME: make it complete!
 The following typographic conventions are used in this book:
 
 \begin{tabular}{ p{0.15\textwidth} p{0.8\textwidth} }
@@ -70,11 +59,15 @@
 
 
 \section*{Regarded versions}
-text
+%FIXME: do I need this (here)?
+
 
 \section*{Additional sources}
-\NAME{RFCs}, other books, source code, websites
+%FIXME: specify the really important external documents here
+%TODO: write about the bundled CD, and tell what's included
+\NAME{RFC}s, other books, source code, websites
 
-	
+
 \section*{Acknowledgements}
-text
+%FIXME: write this at the very end.
+% dont forget: proove readers, suggestion makers, supporters, ...
diff -r e150e6406019 -r b3ba69ef35ab thesis/thesis.tex
--- a/thesis/thesis.tex	Tue Oct 07 14:45:43 2008 +0200
+++ b/thesis/thesis.tex	Tue Oct 07 15:32:15 2008 +0200
@@ -19,8 +19,8 @@
 \include{tex/dedication}
 \cleardoublepage
 \tableofcontents
-\listoffigures
-\listoftables
+%\listoffigures
+%\listoftables
 \include{tex/0-preface}
 \setcounter{page}{0}
 \pagenumbering{arabic}