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     1.4  
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     1.6  \section*{Audience}
     1.7 -This document is targeted for \masqmail\ users and for people interested in mail systems in general. Security problems in electronic mail, \unix\ and the \NAME{C} programming language will also be discussed. Additional ones planning to take over an unmaintained software project will find real life experience in here.
     1.8 +This document is targeted for \masqmail\ users and for people interested in mail systems in general.
     1.9 +Security problems in electronic mail, \unix\ and the \NAME{C} programming language will also be discussed.
    1.10 +Additional ones planning to take over an unmaintained software project will find real life experience in here.
    1.11  
    1.12 -In each topic, basic knowledge is preconditioned. Nevertheless introductions are given and sources for further reading will be mentioned.
    1.13 +In each topic, basic knowledge is preconditioned.
    1.14 +Nevertheless introductions are given and sources for further reading will be mentioned.
    1.15  
    1.16 -This work focuses on the \unix\ operating system. Experience in usage, administration and program development is assumed. This includes the basic toolchain (e.g. \name{tar}, \name{grep}, etc.), user, file and permission management, as well as writing, compiling and installing programs written in the \NAME{C} language.
    1.17 +This work focuses on the \unix\ operating system.
    1.18 +Experience in usage, administration and program development is assumed.
    1.19 +This includes the basic toolchain (e.g.\ \name{tar}, \name{grep}, etc.), user, file and permission management, as well as writing, compiling and installing programs written in the \NAME{C} language.
    1.20  
    1.21  General information about \unix\ can be found in \cite{unixprogenv} %FIXME: references
    1.22  . %FIXME: references
    1.23 -explain about administrating \unix. And developing programs in \NAME{C} may be learned from \cite{cprog} and \cite{advunixprog}. %FIXME: references
    1.24 +explain about administrating \unix.
    1.25 +And developing programs in \NAME{C} may be learned from \cite{cprog} and \cite{advunixprog}. %FIXME: references
    1.26  
    1.27  %TODO: should I tell them to send email to me when having questions? Or somewhere else?
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