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     1.4  \addcontentsline{toc}{chapter}{Preface}
     1.5  
     1.6  \section*{Preface}
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    1.38  
    1.39  
    1.40  \section*{Organisation}
    1.41 -text
    1.42 +%FIXME: write about organisation of the book: parts, chapters, sections. And more thats useful to know.
    1.43 +%TODO: have this section after ``Audience''?
    1.44  
    1.45 -\section*{Audience and Assumptions}
    1.46 -text
    1.47 +
    1.48 +\section*{Audience}
    1.49 +This document is targeted for \masqmail\ users and for people interested in mail systems in general. Security problems in electronic mail, \unix\ and the \NAME{C} programming language will also be discussed. Additional ones planning to take over an unmaintained software project will find real life experience in here.
    1.50 +
    1.51 +In each topic, basic knowledge is %FIXME: vorrausgesetzt
    1.52 +. Nevertheless introductions are given and sources for further reading will be mentioned.
    1.53 +
    1.54 +This work focuses on the \unix\ operating system. Experience in usage, administration and program development is assumed. This includes the basic toolchain (e.g. \name{tar}, \name{grep}, etc.), user, file and permission management, as well as writing, compiling and installing programs written in the \NAME{C} language.
    1.55 +
    1.56 +General information about \unix\ can be found in %FIXME: references
    1.57 +. %FIXME: references
    1.58 +explain about administrating \unix. And developing programs in \NAME{C} may be learned from %FIXME: references (``The C programming language'', ``The Unix programming environment'', ...)
    1.59 +.
    1.60 +
    1.61 +%TODO: should I tell them to send email to me when having questions? Or somewhere else?
    1.62 +
    1.63  
    1.64  \section*{How to read this document}
    1.65 -text
    1.66 +%TODO: what to write here??
    1.67 +%TODO: include this in section ``Organisation''?
    1.68 +
    1.69  
    1.70  \section*{Conventions used in the book}
    1.71 -
    1.72 +%TODO: check if this tells what is really used!
    1.73 +%FIXME: make it complete!
    1.74  The following typographic conventions are used in this book:
    1.75  
    1.76  \begin{tabular}{ p{0.15\textwidth} p{0.8\textwidth} }
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    1.79  
    1.80  \section*{Regarded versions}
    1.81 -text
    1.82 +%FIXME: do I need this (here)?
    1.83 +
    1.84  
    1.85  \section*{Additional sources}
    1.86 -\NAME{RFCs}, other books, source code, websites
    1.87 +%FIXME: specify the really important external documents here
    1.88 +%TODO: write about the bundled CD, and tell what's included
    1.89 +\NAME{RFC}s, other books, source code, websites
    1.90  
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    1.92 +
    1.93  \section*{Acknowledgements}
    1.94 -text
    1.95 +%FIXME: write this at the very end.
    1.96 +% dont forget: proove readers, suggestion makers, supporters, ...