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     1.2 +++ b/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Sun Nov 16 14:44:22 2008 +0100
     1.3 @@ -3,11 +3,14 @@
     1.4  \addcontentsline{toc}{chapter}{Preface}
     1.5  
     1.6  \section*{Preface}
     1.7 -%FIXME: write about the motivation to cover this topic
     1.8 +%FIXME: write about the motivation to cover this topic: what is it I want?
     1.9 +% preface == target of the book, related to the reader
    1.10 +% make the topic more concrete and limit it
    1.11  %TODO: have text by oliver here?
    1.12  
    1.13  
    1.14  \section*{Audience}
    1.15 +%TODO: maybe merge mit the intention of the document
    1.16  This document is targeted for \masqmail\ users and for people interested in mail systems in general.
    1.17  Security problems in electronic mail, \unix\ and the \NAME{C} programming language will also be discussed.
    1.18  Additional ones planning to take over an unmaintained software project will find real life experience in here.
    1.19 @@ -29,16 +32,13 @@
    1.20  
    1.21  \section*{Organisation}
    1.22  %FIXME: write about organisation of the book: parts, chapters, sections. And more thats useful to know.
    1.23 -
    1.24 -
    1.25 -\section*{How to read this document}
    1.26 -%TODO: what to write here??
    1.27 -%TODO: include this in section ``Organisation''?
    1.28 +%FIXME: explain where the main part lies (theory vs. implementation)
    1.29  
    1.30  
    1.31  \section*{Conventions used}
    1.32  %TODO: check if this tells what is really used!
    1.33  %FIXME: make it complete!
    1.34 +%FIXME: remove everything not needed. Maybe write only a few sentences text.
    1.35  The following typographic conventions are used in this book:
    1.36  
    1.37  \begin{tabular}{ p{0.15\textwidth} p{0.8\textwidth} }
    1.38 @@ -71,3 +71,4 @@
    1.39  \section*{Acknowledgements}
    1.40  %FIXME: write this at the very end.
    1.41  % dont forget: proove readers, suggestion makers, supporters, ...
    1.42 +% FIXME: if too long, include a file on the CD and refer on it here