1.1 --- a/thesis/tex/5-Improvements.tex	Wed Feb 04 12:37:07 2009 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/thesis/tex/5-Improvements.tex	Thu Feb 05 11:34:20 2009 +0100
     1.3 @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
     1.4  
     1.5  The last chapter came to the result that further development is best done in a double-strategy. First the existing code base should be improved to satisfy the most important needs in order to make it usable for some more time. Then \masqmail\ should get redesigned from scratch and rebuild to gain a secure and modern \MTA\ architecture for the future.
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     1.7 -This chapter finally gives concrete suggestions \emph{how} to realize these plans.
     1.8 +This chapter finally describes approaches and techniques for the work on the current code base, and it introduces ideas and plans for a new, modern \MTA\ design which will become the next generation of \masqmail.
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    1.10 -The first part covers the short-time goals which base on current code. The second part deals with the long-time goal---the redesign.
    1.11 +The first part of the chapter covers the short-time goals that base on the current code. The second part deals with the long-time goal---the redesign.
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