diff thesis/tex/0-preface.tex @ 253:4dacd0d50342

work on intro and preface
author meillo@marmaro.de
date Mon, 12 Jan 2009 12:52:36 +0100
parents 724cc6057105
children 56cc2f5755f8
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--- a/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Mon Jan 12 12:52:05 2009 +0100
+++ b/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Mon Jan 12 12:52:36 2009 +0100
@@ -79,11 +79,11 @@
 \\ &\\
 
 \citeweb{masqmail:homepage} &
-is a reference to a website. Websites differ from documents as they are hardly a text written by some author, but a place where information is gathered.
+is a reference to a website. Websites differ from documents as they are less of a text written by some author, but more a place where information is gathered.
 \\ &\\
 
 \RFC821 &
-is a reference to the \name{Request For Comments} number 821. \RFC{}s are only referenced in this way. A list of relevant \RFC{}s and how they can be retrieved is available in the Appendix. %fixme: add ref
+is a reference to the \name{Request For Comments}, here the one numbered 821. \RFC{}s are only referenced in this way. A list of relevant \RFC{}s and how they can be retrieved is available in the Appendix. %fixme: add ref
 \\ &\\
 
 \end{tabular}