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work on intro and preface
author meillo@marmaro.de
date Mon, 12 Jan 2009 12:52:36 +0100
parents 724cc6057105
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     1.1 --- a/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Mon Jan 12 12:52:05 2009 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Mon Jan 12 12:52:36 2009 +0100
     1.3 @@ -79,11 +79,11 @@
     1.4  \\ &\\
     1.5  
     1.6  \citeweb{masqmail:homepage} &
     1.7 -is a reference to a website. Websites differ from documents as they are hardly a text written by some author, but a place where information is gathered.
     1.8 +is a reference to a website. Websites differ from documents as they are less of a text written by some author, but more a place where information is gathered.
     1.9  \\ &\\
    1.10  
    1.11  \RFC821 &
    1.12 -is a reference to the \name{Request For Comments} number 821. \RFC{}s are only referenced in this way. A list of relevant \RFC{}s and how they can be retrieved is available in the Appendix. %fixme: add ref
    1.13 +is a reference to the \name{Request For Comments}, here the one numbered 821. \RFC{}s are only referenced in this way. A list of relevant \RFC{}s and how they can be retrieved is available in the Appendix. %fixme: add ref
    1.14  \\ &\\
    1.15  
    1.16  \end{tabular}