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diff thesis/tex/0-preface.tex @ 407:4b151c1b3835

remove obsolete comments plus tiny fixes
author meillo@marmaro.de
date Sun, 08 Feb 2009 23:57:50 +0100
parents e57129f57faa
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     1.1 --- a/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Sun Feb 08 23:51:48 2009 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/thesis/tex/0-preface.tex	Sun Feb 08 23:57:50 2009 +0100
     1.3 @@ -55,7 +55,6 @@
     1.4  
     1.5  
     1.6  \section*{Conventions}
     1.7 -%TODO: check it!
     1.8  The following typographic conventions are used in this thesis:
     1.9  
    1.10  \begin{enumerate}
    1.11 @@ -91,12 +90,7 @@
    1.12  
    1.13  My \person{Dad} and my friend \person{Julian Forster} took time for me so I could explain various parts of the thesis to them; this was important, thanks. \person{James Stenard} was of great help in questions about the English language, thanks. \person{Roger Schietzel} double-checked all web addresses and \NAME{ISBN}s for validity, thanks for covering this bulky task.
    1.14  
    1.15 -\person{Henry Atting},
    1.16 -\person{Joachim Breitner},
    1.17 -\person{Marc Geis},
    1.18 -\person{Jochen Roth},
    1.19 -and \person{Hans-J\"org Schaaf}
    1.20 -(in alphabetical order) had a look at my thesis and returned comments and suggestions---each one was valuable. Thank you all.
    1.21 +\person{Henry Atting}, \person{Joachim Breitner}, \person{Marc Geis}, \person{Jochen Roth}, and \person{Hans-J\"org Schaaf} (in alphabetical order) had a look at my thesis and returned comments and suggestions---each one was valuable. Thank you all.
    1.22  
    1.23  Not to forget is everyone who discussed with me on mailing lists and in private communication, and my family for backing me.
    1.24