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 \section*{Conventions}
-%TODO: check it!
 The following typographic conventions are used in this thesis:
 
 \begin{enumerate}
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 My \person{Dad} and my friend \person{Julian Forster} took time for me so I could explain various parts of the thesis to them; this was important, thanks. \person{James Stenard} was of great help in questions about the English language, thanks. \person{Roger Schietzel} double-checked all web addresses and \NAME{ISBN}s for validity, thanks for covering this bulky task.
 
-\person{Henry Atting},
-\person{Joachim Breitner},
-\person{Marc Geis},
-\person{Jochen Roth},
-and \person{Hans-J\"org Schaaf}
-(in alphabetical order) had a look at my thesis and returned comments and suggestions---each one was valuable. Thank you all.
+\person{Henry Atting}, \person{Joachim Breitner}, \person{Marc Geis}, \person{Jochen Roth}, and \person{Hans-J\"org Schaaf} (in alphabetical order) had a look at my thesis and returned comments and suggestions---each one was valuable. Thank you all.
 
 Not to forget is everyone who discussed with me on mailing lists and in private communication, and my family for backing me.